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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 27317"><p>Thank you for the feedback. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Steve, I'm glad you're reading my story too now and that you think it's a good follow up to original Dallas. I take it as a big compliment coming from you. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>Your Dallas 2018 story is a really good follow up to Dallas TNT too. You've done a good job at cleaning up the mess Cidre left us with in that one...</p><p>I really loved "JR Returns" but not "War of the Ewings" so yes me too wish this could have happened instead...</p><p></p><p>Sanda, you'll find out how Afton will react soon, but first we have the second half of the family dinner...</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Back at Southfork, half an hour later had Pam and Bobby finally started to reach the end of their story about how they’d met again. Pam said, “And then after we’d decided that we were all gonna come back here for a visit I brought Bobby over to my place so that he could get to meet Rebecca…”</p><p></p><p>“Yeah you should have seen her when we got there, she was out in the backyard swinging away and when she came over to me and hugged me and looked up at me with those little hazel eyes I just knew that she had to be mine,” Bobby said emotionally.</p><p></p><p>Miss Ellie discretely wiped away a tear from her eye, “Ah this is just too much. I’m so happy for you both. I know how long you’ve always wanted another child and…” Miss Ellie took one good look at Rebecca. “I’m overwhelmed, I mean to come home and find another grandchild is not something you’d do every day and…”</p><p></p><p>“But Mama!” JR interrupted his mother. “You come home and find a new grandchild and you’ll take one look at the kid and you believe it?” JR asked. “Isn’t that a little gullible?”</p><p></p><p>“JR, I don’t understand the accusation,” Miss Ellie tried to overlook what her son was implying.</p><p></p><p>“What I meant was how can we be sure <em>that child </em>really is Bobby & Pam’s daughter?” JR asked. “For all we know Pam could have just taken the first best kid off a street and…”</p><p></p><p>“Watch it JR!” Bobby stood up angrily.</p><p></p><p>“Oops! Looks like I just stepped all over baby-brother’s toes. Why is that Bobby?” JR mocked his little brother. “Is it because deep down you know that I can be right?”</p><p></p><p>“JR you’d better watch your damn mouth, as I am damn tired of all your wisecrack…”</p><p></p><p>“It’s not wisecrack! I am just saying the truth and you can’t blame me for being suspicious, since with that Barnes woman’s track record…even if the child happens to be hers. Who’s to say that it’s yours?” JR challenged Bobby. “Remember how she carried on with that Mark Graison even before you were divorced I bet she hasn’t exactly lived like a nun when you were apart this time either and…”</p><p></p><p>Bobby had finally had enough and grabbed JR’s shirt collar, “You shut your bloody mouth! You don’t know what the hell you’re talking about!” Bobby hissed, as hearing JR mentioning Pam with other men made him see red. He was just beyond himself with anger and jealousy.</p><p></p><p>Seeing the hateful look in Bobby’s eyes even JR knew that he had overstepped the line. “Let go of me Bob! I was just…”</p><p></p><p>“No not until you’ll get what you deserve!” Bobby yelled.</p><p></p><p>He was just about to hit JR when Miss Ellie yelled, “Stop it!”</p><p></p><p>Their mother’s scream didn’t stop Bobby, but it did give JR enough time to dodge his brother’s punch and weasel himself out of Bobby’s grip. Furious with him Bobby quickly grabbed his arm and was just about to launch another punch when Clayton and Ray pulled them away from each other, “Now take it easy boys,” Clayton told them to cool it.</p><p></p><p>“But JR said…” Bobby protested.</p><p></p><p>“I know what he said but your mother has just returned from her vacation and she deserves better than to have the two of you at each other’s throats on our first family dinner together in ages,” Clayton said.</p><p></p><p>The boys exchanged a look before turning their attention to their mother. “Sorry mama,” JR apologized.</p><p></p><p>“Yeah I’m sorry too,” Bobby also apologized. </p><p></p><p>“Good, then why don’t we sit down and finish our dinner?” Miss Ellie suggested before going on, “and JR you’ll better keep your snide remarks to yourself from now on and if you have to speak up. Choose your timing, since it’s really bad taste to attack someone like you did Pam, in front of her children…” Miss Ellie lectured her son.</p><p></p><p>JR hung his head low, knowing that he was beaten. “Yes Mama…I’m sorry Christopher that you had to see that…” JR then apologized to his nephew. But on purpose he didn’t say a word to Rebecca and no one wanted to force him to. Rebecca however crossed her arms in front of her chest and quickly made up her mind that her uncle JR was just as bad news as her mom had always told her and one day she was going to make him pay for it…</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 27317"] Thank you for the feedback. :) Steve, I'm glad you're reading my story too now and that you think it's a good follow up to original Dallas. I take it as a big compliment coming from you. :) Your Dallas 2018 story is a really good follow up to Dallas TNT too. You've done a good job at cleaning up the mess Cidre left us with in that one... I really loved "JR Returns" but not "War of the Ewings" so yes me too wish this could have happened instead... Sanda, you'll find out how Afton will react soon, but first we have the second half of the family dinner... Back at Southfork, half an hour later had Pam and Bobby finally started to reach the end of their story about how they’d met again. Pam said, “And then after we’d decided that we were all gonna come back here for a visit I brought Bobby over to my place so that he could get to meet Rebecca…” “Yeah you should have seen her when we got there, she was out in the backyard swinging away and when she came over to me and hugged me and looked up at me with those little hazel eyes I just knew that she had to be mine,” Bobby said emotionally. Miss Ellie discretely wiped away a tear from her eye, “Ah this is just too much. I’m so happy for you both. I know how long you’ve always wanted another child and…” Miss Ellie took one good look at Rebecca. “I’m overwhelmed, I mean to come home and find another grandchild is not something you’d do every day and…” “But Mama!” JR interrupted his mother. “You come home and find a new grandchild and you’ll take one look at the kid and you believe it?” JR asked. “Isn’t that a little gullible?” “JR, I don’t understand the accusation,” Miss Ellie tried to overlook what her son was implying. “What I meant was how can we be sure [I]that child [/I]really is Bobby & Pam’s daughter?” JR asked. “For all we know Pam could have just taken the first best kid off a street and…” “Watch it JR!” Bobby stood up angrily. “Oops! Looks like I just stepped all over baby-brother’s toes. Why is that Bobby?” JR mocked his little brother. “Is it because deep down you know that I can be right?” “JR you’d better watch your damn mouth, as I am damn tired of all your wisecrack…” “It’s not wisecrack! I am just saying the truth and you can’t blame me for being suspicious, since with that Barnes woman’s track record…even if the child happens to be hers. Who’s to say that it’s yours?” JR challenged Bobby. “Remember how she carried on with that Mark Graison even before you were divorced I bet she hasn’t exactly lived like a nun when you were apart this time either and…” Bobby had finally had enough and grabbed JR’s shirt collar, “You shut your bloody mouth! You don’t know what the hell you’re talking about!” Bobby hissed, as hearing JR mentioning Pam with other men made him see red. He was just beyond himself with anger and jealousy. Seeing the hateful look in Bobby’s eyes even JR knew that he had overstepped the line. “Let go of me Bob! I was just…” “No not until you’ll get what you deserve!” Bobby yelled. He was just about to hit JR when Miss Ellie yelled, “Stop it!” Their mother’s scream didn’t stop Bobby, but it did give JR enough time to dodge his brother’s punch and weasel himself out of Bobby’s grip. Furious with him Bobby quickly grabbed his arm and was just about to launch another punch when Clayton and Ray pulled them away from each other, “Now take it easy boys,” Clayton told them to cool it. “But JR said…” Bobby protested. “I know what he said but your mother has just returned from her vacation and she deserves better than to have the two of you at each other’s throats on our first family dinner together in ages,” Clayton said. The boys exchanged a look before turning their attention to their mother. “Sorry mama,” JR apologized. “Yeah I’m sorry too,” Bobby also apologized. “Good, then why don’t we sit down and finish our dinner?” Miss Ellie suggested before going on, “and JR you’ll better keep your snide remarks to yourself from now on and if you have to speak up. Choose your timing, since it’s really bad taste to attack someone like you did Pam, in front of her children…” Miss Ellie lectured her son. JR hung his head low, knowing that he was beaten. “Yes Mama…I’m sorry Christopher that you had to see that…” JR then apologized to his nephew. But on purpose he didn’t say a word to Rebecca and no one wanted to force him to. Rebecca however crossed her arms in front of her chest and quickly made up her mind that her uncle JR was just as bad news as her mom had always told her and one day she was going to make him pay for it… [/QUOTE]
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